Wednesday, January 16, 2013

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I know ,life is a little screwed up.,
Falling for you was my bad luck.

But you thought -for you ,I'll cry my whole life ?
No Dear! that's completely something not my tribe.

I am not someone who is gonna wait for you after all your mistakes.,
Sorry dear! trust takes year to build but needs few seconds to break.

And for sure I won't take revenge or plot anything against you.,
But I'll make sure that you regret breaking my faith, Trust me, one day you'll do!

31 comments:

AJNABI said...

Nyc post...!!! Vry motivative... Keep writing

Sri Valli said...

Lovely poem! Vinisha!

Jay Singh said...

Hi Vinisha,

So, it's the season of revenge, that too komolika style (Nikaaaaaah!!!) :p

Good post, liked it.

Regards

Jay
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Green Speck said...

Spoken with grit :-)

Meoww said...

Oh yes! Very well written :)
Nice, strong, confident!

Panchali said...

Women can be much more aggressive then Men when they WANT to be...Lovely poem!!

Rajesh said...

Brave up!

Kriti Kandhari said...

This is something I badly needed!!! So glad to come across this awesomely inspiring and strong brave words.... Kudos!!

Umesh Awasthi said...

Well written and i some how like that title..
Lovely poem

Rebellious Submission said...

A lovely poem!!! Positive and motivating. Life is always in moving ahead and not being stuck..

jaish_vats said...

Well reflected emotions there!

vinisha said...

@ajnabi -thank you :)

vinisha said...

@valli- thankzz a lot

vinisha said...

@jay -hahah ,yeah ,it is :P

vinisha said...

@amrit -:) sometimes you need too :D :D

vinisha said...

@meoww -thank you dear :)

vinisha said...

@panchali mam -surely they do -thankzz a ton for visiting and reading my poem :)

vinisha said...

@rajesh sir -thankz :D :D

vinisha said...

@kirti - glad to know ,you liked it -thankzz a ton for visiting and joining my blog
P.S -welcome here :)

vinisha said...

@umesh sir - glad to know that -thankzz a lot :)

vinisha said...

@rebellious submission -thankzz a ton :)

vinisha said...

@jaish -thank you for visiting and reading :)

magiceye said...

Wait and see? :) tough talk! I like it!

vinisha said...

@deepak - haahaha...yeah,sometimes you gotta be like that :P :D

Debopam said...

Such a nice and sensible post.....

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vinisha said...

@debopan -thank you :)

AmitAag said...

Great spirit! through a very nice poem!

vinisha said...

@amit sir -thank you :)

Neenu said...

Good going vinisha.. :) reminded me of Pablo Neruda's poem 'If you Forget Me'..

"and you decide
to leave me at the shore
of the heart where I have roots,
remember that on that day,
at that hour,I shall lift my arms
and my roots will set off
to seek another land. "

vinisha said...

thankzzzzzzzzzz a tonnnnnn neenu :D :D

a gal in city said...

Vinisha

its again an awesome poem,

I can say 'you are incridible writer'