Monday, December 17, 2012

You said :)

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You said you'll walk every path of our life,looking in my eye :)
You said you'll always be there for me, like my sky.

   Together our life has seen many sun's and shades,
   And you promised to be with me, whenever I feel pale. :)

  When you were mine ,there were no fears :)
  And I know you will never let me make my relation with tears :)

  Your love thought me to live being selfless :)
  And I never knew when you became my best strength and my worst weakness :)

 To share all my life,my heart has always wished for someone of my own :)
 And see fate has found me your shoulder were I can lay my head down :)

28 comments:

Noopur Kothari said...

Beautiful Indeed... God bless you :)

Arti said...

Straight from the heart, the poetry is beautiful :)

Sri Valli said...

Sweet poem Vini! natural flow of feelings :)

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

someone who becomes our strength becomes our weakness too! very well put!

Rajrupa Gupta said...

Beautiful

Sangeeta Reghu said...

Heart-warming!!

Green Speck said...

This has the sweetness of love and trust ... beautifully written !!!

Jay Singh said...

Hi Vinisha,

A perfect post to match the present marriage season. Loved it. :)

Keep up the good work

Regards

Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

Rajesh said...

Very beautiful.

AmitAag said...

Very beautiful!

Defiant Princess said...

beautiful poem :)

xoxo
Defiant Princess
khanvibes.blogspot.com

CYNOSURE said...

lovely composition vinisha... :)

Ashwini said...

How sweet :)

vinisha said...

@noopur - thank you :) :)

vinisha said...

@arti mam - thankz a ton :) :)

vinisha said...

@valli - thank you :) :)

vinisha said...

@meenakshi - thankzz for dropping by :) :)

vinisha said...

@rajrupa :) :)

vinisha said...

@sangeeta -- :D :D :)

vinisha said...

@amrit - thankzz a lot :)

vinisha said...

@jay - thank you :)

vinisha said...

@rajesh sir -thank you :)

vinisha said...

@amit sir -thank you :)

vinisha said...

@defaint princess -thank you dear:)

vinisha said...

@sarabjeet -thank you :)

vinisha said...

@ashwini - :) :)

Subhorup Dasgupta said...

Beautifully written, and captures the essence of love perfectly. Yet, in the interest of happiness and personal growth, love should be such that even in absence of the beloved, it blossoms just as beautifully. For many of us, it cross the line and turns into dependency and a kind of possession, such that once the beloved is no longer present, the love turns into grief, anger and mourning. Keep writing.

vinisha said...

@subhorup sir -thankz alot for your beautiful comment to which I completly agree too :)