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Some dreams ,some fears ,some regrets and some tears.
Moving ahead in this sweet and bitter life ,
With a hint of spice and some salt,
There are days when you just want everything to halt.
Sometimes there are bright & warm sunny days,
And sometimes there are cold & gloomy winds to face.
To our surprise suddenly sometime there is a rain of love,
But when it ends all we are left doing is reprove.
And certainly again there comes the cold,
And your life starts to take another fold.
With teary eyes,loneliness and regrets,why we forget the simple told
That there is a big bright smile after every pain,
And after every Autumn there are cheerful lovely rains :) :)
24 comments:
Nyc post short nd sweet... Really life is same lyk season nd change.. Always...
@AJNABI---thank you :) for the appreciation :)
"And after every Autumn there are cheerful lovely rains" - seasons are so much like life ... they keep changing, good followed by bad and good again ... well written :-)
@amrit ---thankkkkk you -glad u liked :) :)
@debopam---thank you for reading and appreciating :) :)
That there is a big bright smile after every pain,
And after every Autumn there are cheerful lovely rains
Inspiring and optimistic lines...Good one!
Lovely poem and that Sony badge is looking so cool. Congrats again dear :)
The words flow as mellifluously as the seasons....delicious piece, Vinisha.
Caught your post after a long time!
Beautiful.
Wow.. that was so serene and beautiful. Our life is a cycle of seasons and like nature we experience bliss and pain like a gentle breeze or the biting cold. Lovely and thoughtful post. :)
@valli---thankzzzzz a ton valli for you inspiring words .....they mean a lot :) :)
@saru mam -thankzzzz a alot - mam its my first prizeeee for blogging and its because all of u coz you people have encouraged me alot from your inspiring comments :) :)
@panchali mam - thankzzz a ton mam -glad you liked and ya mam its a post after a very long time caught in very hectic schedule that got no time to write any post or read anyone else posts :( :(
@rajesh -thank you :) :)
@raj -thankzz a ton -glad you liked it :) :)
The last line of your poem has an eerie resemblance to the last line of
Shelley's Ode To The West Wind . Lovely poem.
Like the way you ended it on a positive note!
@swarnali -- after seeing your comment i actually searched for this shelley's poem and must say its a very beautiful poem ,read it first time and ya my last line have little resemblence to this poem ....her poem say's
"The trumpet of a prophecy! O Wind,
If Winter comes, can Spring be far behind?".....thankz swarnali to make me read this beautiful poem :) :)
@deepak - thankzz a ton :) :)
Life in a verse. Like the positive streak!
sweet or bitter. Life Moves. Good one Vinisha.
@roopa ----- thankzz a ton :) :)
This was absolutely amazing on every possible level. I'm speechless...
@optimistic existentialist -thankzz a ton -glad you liked :) :)
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