(image courtesy -google)The shine of moon is slowly fading
The twinkle of stars is vanishing too
Everything seems to be so dark and empty
And my love is asking your ego for some pity
My life has turned its face on me
And I am still lost somewhere in midst of your sea
The silence which I am hearing is loudest of all
I still remember you swore to handle me when I fall
How should I kill memories of every second I spend without you?
Or how should these few lines explain my unbearable spasm to you?
For your single answer I have longed for my whole life
But I wonder how my tears wouldn't even give you a strike
This night is darkest and longest of all I've ever seen
Still I hope you to be here, as you promised,you would have been
33 comments:
So much of pain....
GR8 work...
So touching and sadd....:(
But, beautifully penned poem..
Very emotional.
Well Written :)
a beautiful poem for the one you love !!!
Really nice lines.... So touching. I am feeling sad now... :(
@deepak .....yeah :( thankzz for reading :)
@himanshu ....thank you :)
@valli- yeah its on sad side -thankzz a ton for reading and appreciating
@rajesh - thank you :)
@jaish - thankzzz a ton :)
@amrit- thankzz for reading and appreciating :)
@meoww- thankzz a ton for reading and appreciating :) :) m sorry that it made you sad :(
beautiful lines ! theres so much of pain in them ...
@TTT.....thankzz a ton for reading and appreciating :) :)
Thats awesome... So emotional ...
And yes thanks for secretly following my blog...
@amit.....thanksz a ton for reading and appreciating ....
P.S - I think i joined your blog today and I tried to follow it publically but your site settings are not allowing me
When you said that tears could strike a chord, it was so painful. Full of emotions and a beautiful read.
@saru mam - thankzz a ton for your beautiful comment :) :)
..sorely touching!!
Touching piece...very well penned!
where has my comment vanished..? awww...
But, I loved this emotive piece...beautiful!
@amit sir .....thankzz a ton reading and appreciating :) :)
@panchali mam - thankzzz a ton for such beautiful appreciative words mam ......
P.S- mam which comment are you talking about ?
Such a touching read, very heart warming vinisha. Could feel each line that you wrote here.
@Arti --thankzz a ton for such appreciating words - they mean a lot - thank you :) :)
Lovely read :)
Do stop by my blog!! I'd love your visits & comments!
@kappu ....thankzz a ton :) :)
Wonderful write up...i can feel the pain .....
Thank you khushbu :) :)
Loved how the painful emotions are being described in this little poem. Nice work!!!
@S.S 22 - thank you :) :)
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