Tuesday, September 18, 2012

VACUITY

Sad Animated Full Moon (image courtesy -google)
The shine of moon is slowly fading
The twinkle of stars is vanishing too
Everything seems to be so dark and empty
And my love is asking your ego for some pity
My life has turned its face on me
And I am still lost somewhere in midst of your sea
The silence which I am hearing is loudest of all
I still remember you swore to handle me when I fall
How should I kill memories of every second I spend without you?
Or how should these few lines explain my unbearable spasm to you?
For your single answer I have longed for my whole life
But I wonder how my tears wouldn't even give you a strike
This night is darkest and longest of all I've ever seen
Still I hope you to be here, as you promised,you would have been

33 comments:

magiceye said...

So much of pain....

Himanshu Nandwana said...

GR8 work...

Sri Valli said...

So touching and sadd....:(
But, beautifully penned poem..

Rajesh said...

Very emotional.

jaish_vats said...

Well Written :)

Green Speck said...

a beautiful poem for the one you love !!!

Meoww said...

Really nice lines.... So touching. I am feeling sad now... :(

vinisha said...

@deepak .....yeah :( thankzz for reading :)

vinisha said...

@himanshu ....thank you :)

vinisha said...

@valli- yeah its on sad side -thankzz a ton for reading and appreciating

vinisha said...

@rajesh - thank you :)

vinisha said...

@jaish - thankzzz a ton :)

vinisha said...

@amrit- thankzz for reading and appreciating :)

vinisha said...

@meoww- thankzz a ton for reading and appreciating :) :) m sorry that it made you sad :(

TTT said...

beautiful lines ! theres so much of pain in them ...

vinisha said...

@TTT.....thankzz a ton for reading and appreciating :) :)

Amit - The Frivolous Analyser said...

Thats awesome... So emotional ...
And yes thanks for secretly following my blog...

vinisha said...

@amit.....thanksz a ton for reading and appreciating ....
P.S - I think i joined your blog today and I tried to follow it publically but your site settings are not allowing me

Saru Singhal said...

When you said that tears could strike a chord, it was so painful. Full of emotions and a beautiful read.

vinisha said...

@saru mam - thankzz a ton for your beautiful comment :) :)

AmitAag said...

..sorely touching!!

Panchali said...

Touching piece...very well penned!

Panchali said...

where has my comment vanished..? awww...
But, I loved this emotive piece...beautiful!

vinisha said...

@amit sir .....thankzz a ton reading and appreciating :) :)

vinisha said...

@panchali mam - thankzzz a ton for such beautiful appreciative words mam ......
P.S- mam which comment are you talking about ?

Arti said...

Such a touching read, very heart warming vinisha. Could feel each line that you wrote here.

vinisha said...

@Arti --thankzz a ton for such appreciating words - they mean a lot - thank you :) :)

Kappu said...

Lovely read :)

Do stop by my blog!! I'd love your visits & comments!

vinisha said...

@kappu ....thankzz a ton :) :)

Khushbu Verma said...

Wonderful write up...i can feel the pain .....

vinisha said...

Thank you khushbu :) :)

saajansood22 said...

Loved how the painful emotions are being described in this little poem. Nice work!!!

vinisha said...

@S.S 22 - thank you :) :)