(image courtesy -google)We met ,we fell for each other and we fall apart too.You became my dream and that dream which I saw with open eyes. But now all we have is a miles of space in between us.Still there are some unknown threads which are tying me to you ,still I see the dreams of both you & me to be together. I don't know how should I tell you about those feelings which are still alive some where in my heart,but please don't get me wrong,for your sake I've tried and I've tried hard to completely let you free.But still there is something which binds you and me.May be my eyes can explain what my heart feels because I am unable to find words to explain it . I don't know was it your talks ,your smile or your first touch which made me fall for you or it all happened after you left -please don't ask me I have no idea about it. I know that you tried and tried your best but may be it was my insecurities which didn't let me speak my heart and I still regret that why I didn't said what I felt for you - Why I didn't said yes,even i feel the same for you.
31 comments:
Deep and heartfelt... the pain in the written voice could be heard.
✿ Heart melting...:) NICE ✿
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beautiful....
Aww... a pining heart..it's so wondeful..
Some moments are really full of regrets ... but then, things always fall in place !!!
Touching piece of writing.
As someone said: if you love something, let it free, if it doesnt come back to you, it was not meant to be!
@arti -thankzz a ton :) :)
@vinay- thankzz a lot
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@rajrupa - thank you :)
@amrit - yeah sometimes- thankzz :) :)
@meoww-thankzz alot and yes you are right sometimes we gotta let our love free :) :)
Very beautiful...deep!
@amit sir -thank you :) :)
Tender plea.. beautiful
@deepak -thakkk youuuuu :) :)
so deep and touchy..
@ranita mam -thankzzz a ton :) :)
very touching and heart felt beautifully penned
@alka mam - thank you :) :)
Full of emotions.
Very touching Vinisha.
@rajesh - thankzz a ton :)
@jaish- thankkkk youuuuu :) :)
Very well expressed-a moment lost leaves a regret for ever.
@indu mam - thankss a lot :) :)
Wonderful write up...i can feel the pain .....
Thank you khushbu :) :)
Nice one :)
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@kappu -thank you :) :)
Just another masterpiece by Vinisha. I alwayz appreciate the way u describe every feelings whether cheerful or painful. Also sometimes i wonder if i could develop such a penning capability like you. Keep it up:):):)
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